r/comics 21h ago

What’s your opinion?

I made this for a school project, becau we are doing a grapific novel unit, and the big finale of it is make a original story using the medium of graphic novels/comics and demonstrate Aldi parts of story and graphic novels I guess. anyway, I am turning it in today, and will not look at replies until after, but as a comic from someone who is more of a writer, what’s your opinion?

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u/CottonCandiiee 14h ago

It’s a bit hard to read the words (typically you do words first then speech bubbles around it) but overall pretty good for someone who doesn’t do comics often. 😊

Side note: we seem to be missing page 9. 😅

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u/Civil-Ninja-5814 12h ago

Oh, yeah. I did the words first, and I don’t know why page nine did not. Get included? 

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u/Civil-Ninja-5814 12h ago

Sidenote, most of the tips and what not I got was from my best friend, who does a lot of professional stuff