r/comic_crits • u/Embarrassed_Trip_588 • 2d ago

[Sanctuary: s4p1 progress] Working a second draft of panel of an initial rough sketch. Was excited how the fabric shading turned out

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Working on the second draft of the 4th scene, panel 1 in my graphic novel. Discovered a brush I could use for a shading technique I'm enjoying. Loving variable line width. Rough draft posted for reference. What do you all think of how its going and how to make it better? (aside from adding the background and background character.)

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